Minecraft story

setting: real life version of minecraft
year 400 Ancient Greece

Master Villager:

Trains other villagers to fight
The strength of a god
Looks wise, serious and has a medium white beard
He’s a hero because he saves villagers from Zombies and other monsters

Boy:
He’s an orphan
He’s 4 years old
he has blonde hair

Monsters:
bad guys
name: ender man,zombies,skeletons,pig mens,cave spider,creeper,blaze,enderdragon,ghast,slime,zombie villager,

boss: Herobrine

Plot:
In the castle, some of the villagers were going up the stairs into the entrance.It is big and made of stone with big doors made of wood. They found some dead bodies, and so they started searching for survivors. Whilst they were looking they found the boy, and he was unconscious. The villagers picked the boy up and took him to the Master. The Master gave the boy medicine and made him better. Then the boy began to do farming for the master, by feeding animals and he started planting vegetables. If the boy grew stronger from working for the master, he may have proved his worthiness trained by the master to become a warrior. The boy the training to become to be warrior.

The boy is out chopping the wood and he saw a zombie. The zombie was creeping towards the boy, he looked at the zombie, he drew his sword out and chopped his head off. The blood squirts over half of the boy’s face and the zombie head landed on the floor and his body was still standing and the boy kicked it over.The boy went back to the village and told the master “Be careful!! There might be more monsters during the night!”.

Later that night there was a strange sound coming from outside. The boy went outside to investigate. He found a nether portal. He drew his sword out and he alarmed the villages. The master began to protect the villages. There was monsters coming out of the portal the boy started to attack the monsters. The big monster started to attack the master the master dodged  the monsters. then he got distracted and he got hit by a big mace. the the boy killed the big monster by jumping on his back and stabbed him on his neck.  the monster fell down and broke the nether portal. Then he checked the master he was shocked he was dead. the boy cried holding the master. he told the villagers that the master was dead and they took the master to the temple and buried him there.

the boy went back to the village to the masters house. he found a piece of paper which said Herobrine on the front. the boy know instantly who it was and opened it he read the message.

Herobrien is too powerful                                                                                                                                                                                                                   I can not defeat him                                                                                                                                                                                                                           who will help me?

The boy knew what to do. He was going to go to that place and kill Herobrine. The boy was nervous but still brave. He picked up his sword and got on a hourse. he went to the place to start his next adventure.

 

 

2 Comments

  1. I can see you have thought about your setting, character and where your disequilibrium will occur – what is the problem that your character will need to solve in order to restore the peace?

  2. What a well developed piece of work.

    You have clearly shown that you understand myths; I’m really pleased with your ending.

    Targets:
    Look at this sentence: ‘Then the boy began to do farming for the master’ – remove the ‘to do’ part and it reads ‘Then the boy began farming for the master’ this is much smoother, farming is he verb and does not need a preposition in this instance.

    Please re-read and edit your spelling and your expression.

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